There is a lot that I want to change with the contents page. I like the picture at the bottom which I have cropped out of the real picture and the way the words fit around the end of the guitar. I also like the picture at the top right of the page however the shadow of the foot has bee cut off and this makes the picture look unprofessional. I think in my final version of the magazine I will remove this picture and add a new one of a different person. I will have one main image in my contents page and include the smaller image of Jordan in the bottom left corner. 

I will follow the conventions of a magazine contents page more by giving the information at the side a better layout and I think I will also remove the grey background I have included and replace it with a plain white background however I will still use the same colour of font to keep up the colour scheme. 

I plan to change the masthead at the top of the page I believe the layout I have given it doesn't look very professional and not what would be expected of a normal magazine I will replace this with the new masthead I will be putting on the front cover of the magazine and I will keep the 'contents' but I will remove the white colour surrounding it. 

the final problem I have with the magazine is the picture and article in the middle of the left side of the page. it stands out and looks out of place and this also gives the magazine an unprofessional image. I will get rid of this and replace it with one main image which takes up around a quarter of the space of the page.